Exposition

The Story of Little Critter: My Trip to the Hospital is a story about the littlest critter who takes a trip to the hospital. It all starts at the soccer field. Lil critter and his friends are playing a soccer game. Lil critter is the lead shot.

Rising Action

As he is about to kick the winning shot inside to goal the goalie gets in the way. He makes the goal, but as everyone yells, “GOAL!”, he yells, “OUCH!.” He sits on the ground clutching his leg telling his mom and his dad it hurts, but he barely cries. His mom and dad are very supportive and tell him that he is very brave for not crying.

Climax

An ambulance comes and takes the lil critter and his mom to the hospital. As the Nurse begins to examine his health he gets very interested by the nurses tools. When she gives him an x-ray he compares the machine to super critter, one of his comic book heroes. The doctor comes in to examine his leg and check to see if it’s broken or not.

Falling Action

The Doctor tells his mom that he does have a broken leg. He gets a cast and is taught how to use crutches. His st try he couldn’t use them right and almost fell. When the doctors tried to help he told him that he could do it him self. After more tried he finally got it right. He was very proud .

Resolution

After they leave the hospital papa and lil sis are both waiting outside for them in the car. Once they get home little critter gets to eat his favorite food in the whole world: spaghetti and meatballs in front of the TV. Once he gets to school the next day all of his class mates and friends call him a hero and brave for winning the game. All of his friend get to sign his cast. He compared it to a rainbow after they all signed it.

Elements of Fiction Brochure

Little Critter:

My Trip to the Hospital

By Jack Brunson